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Thursday, January 10, 2008

tonight

tonight,
my heart was yanked from its dwelling,
it was flattened by a steamroller,
torn to pieces by a rabid dog,
spit on by a drunk retard,
casted onto the sidewalks where snow fell on it,
and the snow then turned to sleet,
and my heart in the middle of it.

it was burned by hellfire,
gnawed by filthy rats,
chewed like tobacco by an outlaw,
shot with a shotgun,
into a million pieces,
uneven,
chunks and strands

all by some words that we all learned to spell,
in order to better our lives,
in a certain way.

6 comments:

atif slim said...

i hope this poem was not written in response to something that actually happened (@.@) because i like it, nice writing =)

HRH Fiza said...

dude, that sounds disturbing =o nice words tho heh

The Soundaholic said...

whatever happened to you?

someone broke your heart?something?

*hugs*

Nicey ;)

Capik! said...

unfortunately, it was written in refernce to sumthing that happend that night.. and my heart was more than broken, but it's ok now :D

FiSHY@iKe said...

ur okay dude? that sounds awful?

The Soundaholic said...

awwwww...

kasihan capik...